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Keddie Burrows's avatar

Oh dear and I have to wait a week. This is defiantly a lesson in patience! Can’t wait!

Ellie Leonard's avatar

Thank you Keddie :)

Maggie's avatar

Beautiful writing.

Linda Roberta Hibbs's avatar

Hi Ellie, this a great story! Thanks to someone whose name I will not mention! I finished my paperwork to GOP Senators Jerry Morans office they seemed very responsive and receptive to the fact, I may or may not get my medication back!

Heather Wynne-Phillips's avatar

Omg! You are killing me here. You cannot just stop there and make me wait!

BTW.. I am LOVING hearing/seeing you on the shows with Lev, Zev etc. You provide a fantastic perspective. They need a female in the mix for sure! I was dying watching you on the episode with M.C. Your non-verbals were priceless and told it all. Love you Girl and love seeing you as a rising star. Keep at it!!

Jamie Dolan's avatar

Like a peaceful warm campfire you just wanted to keep adding more wood. Your art is down right amazing! I couldn't stop reading.....

Emma Ray's avatar

Such a lovely way to describe her writing!!

Lynn's avatar

Reminds me of literature read years ago. Relationship pain, things lost, things found. Waiting, waiting to turn the corner. In a small town, books providing temporary relief as an escape from the daily reality of Otis, a name that fits perfect. Funny how that could be anyone”sl life - saw it around me as a child growing up. Thank you.

Mary-Lou Rouviere's avatar

So, I hadn’t read any of your book and I just started at around 5:00 this morning with chapter 14.

It was intriguing and I went back and started from the beginning. Very good read. Read it all and reread 14. Now I’m really looking forward to chapter 15 😊👍

Emma Ray's avatar

Same! Hungry for more!

LaRhonda's avatar

I love love love this book so much. Please publish this. I want to give it to my sister's. 🩵💙🩵💙

Lisa Nystrom's avatar

Now I have to read 1-13. I should have skipped to the ending first like I used to when I was young. Very good read. I feel like I am there… not many writers can do that.❤️

VEE LAVALLEE's avatar

Chapter 14 is a familiar story for many women unfortunately.

Steve's avatar

Enjoyed your story. I did not know if was about you are a story I am new to your texts.

I was feeling so very sorry for the woman in your story.

I hope that no woman should have to be like the woman in your stories

I am sorry for any woman dealing with abuse

A single man so wanting a partner when there are men treating their partner woman like this.

Time to wish all women in domestic abuse I feel for them.

Emma Ray's avatar

We need more men like you, Steve.

Raewyn Whyte's avatar

By chance I came across your wonderfully immersive writing and have now read from Chapters 1-14 all in one sitting. I look forward to following along! Thank you for sharing.

Patricia's avatar

Another great chapter. 😊

Dotty's avatar

You gotta publish this ....I'm clinging to my seat waiting for the next chapter

Dotty's avatar

Wondering if my next chapter will be close to the next chapter youve written? My dreams will be explaining the next chapter.....and until you release it...I'll be excitedly waiting. 🥰